Hey guys. It's been a while since you've seen something from me, so here you go! This is the first 'chapter' of a small series of shortfilm built up around different action concepts. This is my second Modelviewer machinima, so you'll see a few animation errors, but i hope you'll see past them :).
Note to be made, this is not a tutorial video, so if you see something in this movie that you wan't a tutorial about, go to my website and request one, - NOT HERE, thanks.
I'd love as much constructive criticism as you can give me,
since this is quite a new area for me, so i need some goals for me to reach.
THE STORYLINE:
The actual shortfilm wasn't ment to have an amazing storyline,
it's more of a movie built up around the concept of an action scene. As it is now, this is the first 'chapter' of a smaller shortfilm-series where the actual storyline will be made a tad more clear to the viewers. I had hoped that what i presented in this movie would rise a bit of mystery to why the female was trying to escape, who she was escaping from and the identity of the old man. I hope this will get you into the idea behind the movie itself, and i merely hope you've read this before watching it.
Enjoy,
Gary Hartmann.
www.GaryHartmann.weebly.com