Hello

So this is my first movie, tho i wouldn't quite call it that 'cause of how short it is. But i just wanted to see what people thought of the editing, and i also wanted to know if theres any way for me to improve the quality of the movie.

I've used the tips here in:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XLM8Dm71XEE&feature=BFa&list=PL496A602622870C7E&index=4

Hope you enjoy!


Edit: I only just realised that the music i used is the same as in Kenwood 3, my apologies. Overused music ftw!