Hey guys! Long time lurker here and a huge fan of alot of the work that's been posted here.

I just wanted to put this up in the hope that I would get some decent feedback on it and see if anybody had any tips or tricks they could show me, mostly with After Effects, as I'm really hoping to expand my editing potential.

This is not being posted for skill reasons, rather just I wanted to open up my creative side and see what kind of fun videos I can make with After Effects, so far it's been a blast and you can check out my other videos at -

Youtube.com/user/Amordendil

Again, just looking for any kind of feedback so if you decide you like it/don't like some aspects of it then let me know, please :)
Thanks everyone.