I PRETTY MUCH GAVE UP ON THIS ONE. I was trying pretty hard for awhile, rewriting the script better and better, then I just got tired of this. My acting partner never was able to get on when I needed him. I just started playing halo 3 instead, and I am going to take a break from making movies for awhile. But when I do come back, I am making a new series.

Unfinished Script: http://twoshotprod.freeforums.org/viewtopic.php?p=7#7.